Very good story, I liked it :)
However, you need to work on your tenses and the complete random one sentence point-of-view switches to Jewelz was quite annoying and confusing. At the very least, a line break would be nice.

But apart from that, the idea was very good, and you have written an enjoyable story.

This was such a cute story that was different from most I read. Although I was still confused on what the beast was really was it just Arturo's reflection or really a beast locked in mirrors that could come and go out of them and would attack Arturo? Otherwise wonderful story although I would have liked more fluff, but that's just me! =) keep writing great job.

you're a really good writer, it's well thought out.
:) i loved it :)

Ohmagawd I loved this story!

It's a really nice story and I'm liking it quite a bit (well, the highschool party is something I'm not really enjoying, seems a bit cliche' to me, but I guess it's because in my country there's nothing similar to that so I can't really feel myself partecipating to the event), the characterization is pretty well done and many of the characters actually feel real and believable even with the magic and all that stuff involved in the plot.
There's one thing though which is bothering me since almost the beginning: the point of view from which the whole story is narrated. Seems like the narrator is Nakita's friend from the real world, Jewels, if I'm not mistaken, but up till now it's impossible that she knows any of the story going on and even if the reason why she knows the whole story is going to be revealed in later chapters that doesn't change the fact that she would have needed a presentation right at the beginning explaining why she's telling this story to us. Even with said presentation though it's weird and impossible that she knows exactly what Nakita's is actually thinking, meaning she should just tell the facts or guess about the thoughts and feeling of her friend but not exactly report pieces of Nakita's thoughts' flow including her internal voices (might be possible if she found a sort of journal wrote by the protagonist, but even then it wouldn't explain while she didn't add a mini prologue right before all the narration to explain why she's the one telling us the story and how come she knows it so deeply...she may not reveal the actual reason or the way she got to know it like 'how I got to know this whole story or why I'm writing this now I cannot tell, but, please, read ahead and don't be deterred by the unlikehood of the facts that I'm going to unfold' -I know it aint good xD just making an example-). It's just a technical mistake, but I'd personally change the 'I' when Jewels speaks, it's the only real fault I find in the story up till now but when the narrator is actually present in the plot it makes it a bit annoying to read...in my opinion to make a non-protagonist the narrator of the whole story is not a bad idea, but it's hard to manage especially considering how you built the structure of the story up till now...to include a proper side character as a narrator now it would mean to change quite a lot and pratically rewrite everything because the plot is written as if the point of view is Nakita or at least there's some external narrator with the ability to enter the characters' minds.
The story is quite valid and even a fussy reader, like I am, actually finds it very enjoyable, therefore I hope you might one day revise it *-*
In any case, thanks for the story! I shall keep reading :)

aw. love the endin'. ^^

wait what she prego lmao oh shyt loved it

lol this was awesome I loved it
great job :D

nice! its was really good!

Just so you know, I used my pen name on . Any way, this is good from both auther's and a readers pov. If you were talking about greek mythology the name is persephone. IF not...sorry about that last comment.

oh ilove the story!
it was amazing.
but does the ending indicate she is preganat or not?
i think it does, but i also think it may not...
love the story!
it was amazing =]

Well, I just found this story and read it. I really did enjoy it a great deal. But I love all beauty n the beast stories! This one wasn't any different. It rocked!

oh my God !! that was absolutely adorable!

I really, really loved it.It was absolutely amazing.you should never stop writing, the world would grieve the loss of such a wonderful author and her fantastic stories.

Thank you for posting this story. :D

aw...their first kiss!
okay so maybe their first kiss in REAL life and not a dream. :D

OH. MY. GOSH!
hahahahahHAHAHA! Just imaigining the look on his face has me cracking up!!
hehehe! (wiping tears from my eyes) Heeheho... okay..
ahem.
um..

ur awsome! i love you! and i love your stories!
yaay!

pheww! felt good to get that off my chest!!

tootles see you next story!!

Miz Calixte 8)