there was only the beast, huh..? hm... this makes me curiouser and curiouser...

Aw, that ending was SHWET! I loves me a mystery cliff-hanger (so long as it's not a stupid mystery, and yours definately is a totally funky smart mystery; yay for being creative! *jelous look*). I also love that voice in Kits head, tres amusante.

"She had also gained seven pounds, but most of it was in her chest."...wha? Maybe it's some uber clever thing that I am just too butt-headed to understand, but that was the one sentence that seemed very random to me. I'm not sure I understand it's relevence or connection to anything... Any helpful hints?

Short read, but tres cool chapter; love your work!

I'm glad to hear that because... I AM MADLY IN LOVE WITH YOU! Coincidence, I think not. Great chapter, I like that it isn't all exlained right away, there is still a mystery at hand! Great work, gorgeous moment with the .

Huh? some what confsued by that chapter because of the ending! still cool though... cause Arturo's actually talking.. unless Arturo wasn't arturo*confuzzled* get to find out soon i guess though woo you rock anyways

i love this story, it is awsome, i can't beleive he said he loved her. please update soon. i have to know what happens next

AH! my little brain is confused. That was a good chapter though. AW Arturo loves Kit I love that, it is so cute. Anyway I have a class to go to soon so this can't be long. Just wanted to let you know that this was a good chapter and I hope that you will get the next one out soon cause my mind is confused... or it could just be because it is to early in the morning for me _ bye bye GREAT JOB! _

Poor Arturo! IS the bear in the mirror gone for good now? It was a really good chapter though, looking forward to the next one! (I wanna know what's happened to angelo though?)

agh! please update really soon. this story is so amazingly complicated i have no idea how you're going to write an ending that answers all of the many questions i have. it's really good. it gives me something to think about.

Yay! You updated!

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I was so flippin excited when I got home today from 2 weeks with no computer and you'd updated! Quite satisfactory.

Ok, time for some constructive criticism (everyone's favorite, right? I'm just like Santa Clause...minus the beard and the fat and the jolliness...):

1)I would just make it a bit more clear about Kit's family's initial reaction to her marriage. The kids at school, too. It is just unlcear as to whether or not they all know that this is an, er, unconventional marriage ('cause, ya know, married people do...married people things, and no one seems to care at all whether or not our young Kit has to do, er, married people things...which is kind of a big deal). Hopefully you understood that...

2) I love how your many little plots are all coming together! I'm so jelous :P

3) Yeah, yeah, proof-reading. Spelling is over-rated. Fight the system.

4) The Fredric thing is a little sparse. Mabye a little more explaination about the connections between himself, Cundry, and Draca...more of those crazy evil kids. But perhaps that's too come.

All right, I've done about 500 times more commenting than I'm entitled to.

Arturo, man, he's hot stuff.

This is REALLY REALLY good. I can't believe it! I love it! Nice twists and everything _ I hope you update soon! Can't wait to finally find out about Arturo! He's so lovable... xDD Please update soon!

bit snot obcessed but action packed, whirlwind on.

wow, i luv this story! its so random! update soon...please?

_ Yay! lots of Action scenes! woot...

And Draca is evil? o.O And Dragons are AWESOME! but i dunno if i like Draca being a Dragon. xP

Awesome. This is definitly my favorite of all your stories. Why is Cundry such a jerk? Seems like you mentioned it, but still, gr. I'm guessing she was a very nasty witch before the curse. Well, I wish luck to all your character peoples. Great chapter. Cool action piece.