Hey. *Smiles* I thought he was a girl at first, but I looked back and he was a boy...*Shakes head at one's own foolishness* Oh well, I'm sposed to be reviewing the story.

This is another good one! I promise it is. I simply loved the way he reacted to the poster,

"I wish I could smile like that, I thought. I vaguely remembered knowing how, years and years ago, but it all seemed faded now, like a distant dreamlike memory. Like this world was the only one I understood, the only one I had ever known"

well created characters, deep and intriguing. your talent shines through on this one.

*cries* I know that man! Oh! the pain how awful, how sad. but a beautiful story!

Disturbingly awesome. Superbly depraved. If only the italics could be transferred to FictionPress...

It's times like this I hate my character more. You did great on this one, a perfect Klaes if I say so myself. I'm so glad he just killed Alden, I hate to see him suffer like he is in this. Damn.

Very nice, exactly how a one-shot should be.

Hm...dats kinda scary sounding-but I like how your character still sounds unattached from feeling the whole time. Nicely written.