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| The Watched 2005-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful use of imagery, with the chains and so on. I understand this poem better than I probably should, although I don't know if your interpretation is the same as mine. Interesting structure and form, too. ~Rebellious Karma~(Ellie) |
| aquamoon222 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abuseWow! Thanks for all of thoose reviwes! It was so unexpected!:) Now, this poem I can relate to. It's just so real and I'm sure every one feels this way at one time or another. Very sweet and simple. A lot of raw yearning here. Very true. The format is very nice, it makes everything flow and it's not forced; very natural. Lovely job! Thanks for everything, Amanda |
| The Harlequin Doll 2004-10-31 ch 1, | abuseim so confused..what binds you? what are these chains? yea anyways...omg read my stories entiteled LastLetters: my immortal or whatever. theres a few. i like this poem alot. BRAVO!! ~cry |