Hey, Baka...er (-reddens slightly)...or should I be calling you Twitt here?

Well... I found this a clever story, and I liked Kevin a lot; got a good emotional connection with him within a few paragraphs. Sam the plastic skeleton taking Kevin's place and providing him with a way out of this cut-and-dry life and offering a new, uncertain freedom.

I see how it can stand as a one-shot, but it would be exciting to see more. Kevin's new identity and new life. Where will he go and what would he do now? Seems a whole new world to explore with whole new eyes.

I can't help but wonder what his "death" might do to his girlfriend once she found out. Tentative thought there, since, consider what her brothers death did to her, I almost don't want to know. :D

Hi Baka Bokken! I noticed on your profile page at ff.net that you had some original stuff here. I liked your story. Talk about the chance of a lifetime! There's a lot you could do if you decide to continue since you left lots of possible plot threads open. I think a lot of people toy with the idea of starting completely over, so this story really hits home. Only whatever happened to the cat?

Hopefully you'll remember me as SnowyBlackOwl from the mm.org forums, Baka. I decided to log in as TranquilityGoddess, anyway. Second time I've read Rebirth, and its still very, very good!

Please continue? I really like that. It was very creative and you write it very well.

Good start, I'd really like to see it continued. :)