fantastic.so much energy, and subtle emotions at the same time? youre good at this

Perfect imagery, and wonderful portrayal of human conflicts and passions. The emotions are dead-on.

Letting my persnickety side out, I might point out that very few people who self-injure are open about. I always hid my scars under long sleeves and excuses.

Still, a wonderful and stirring story.

Well done. It is amazing how few folks have the ability to give visual images. You, though, have that gift. Perhaps, if you wish, you could go over some of my writing and give me some pointers for developing that in my own writing.

Very good. Extended fights usually get boring but that's not the case here. It grips you and never lets go, and then the ending, now I'd definitely going to have to read the later parts. :)

as you know i loved it, especially the end, coz it keeps you guessing and thinking wat happens.also loved the fight scene it keeps you in the moment, you know, as if your actually living it.
lots of love
AllyCred

i have to say that you've got soem real talent with writing. i loved it, it was so powerful and i you describe everything really well. i especially love the last part, coz it was so touching.. at least to me. and thanks for all the great reviews you left me, i had a huge stupid grin on my face when i had finished reading them all.
love Zai

Oh my God...That is really good. I love your fight. I can't write high action scenes :( Very good writing style. I love your ending it was really good and made a person have to think...my friend din't get it at first. Very awesome!

Bravo!

OMG.Wonderful. This is honestly the best story I've read on Fictionpress. I hope you plan to write more like it. Fantastic job! You're definetly going on my favourites.