^_^ YAY!! Well, I don't believe in revenge, 'cause it's just wrong. I like the poem, though. Gosh, your poems always give me an idea of what to write. I haven't written a poem since I was in 7th grade (I'm in 8th now)! Thankies ^_^

dark and chilling piece. i like this a lot. it reminds me of one of my own poems. haha. anyway, i really like this, i like the evanescence-like quality. :) nicely conveyed emotion and angst. awesome work.

Yes, it has that Evvy feel, which is funny b/c I'm listening to the CD now. It's pretty good, especially when one considers this is your first lyric thing. I also can relate b/c of the vengencane thing. Good work.

i'm in too much a hurry to login, but i'll say that i truly admire this song...i bet lots of girls can relate to this song and admire it as well. keep up the good work!
-anime freakizoid
p.s. i have one small request though, my new story lament of darkness is need of feedback. so i was wondering if you could review and tell me what you think...

Yes, very evanescence-like. I definately see potential in this song. I like how the beat just flowed so smoothly. It was kind of hard to follow along though cause you would get so into the song and then there would be this word that just throws you off. Very nice though.