Wow. I get the faintest idea this is about suicide. Well, a little more than a faint idea; you wrote it so well. I love how there are lines of poetry in between, I suppose like a note telling the ones she loves she's leaving this world. God, it's magnificent, it really is. You are an astounding writer.

(*ScarletDreamer*)

Nice!I like it.

wow. I love this song so much and I love this story even more. It's amazing, it really made my blood run cold.

Loved it!! keep writing!!~/SIB/

this is really good. I really liked this. Written very nicely, and a very interesting style to write it in! It's beautiful...sad, yet beautiful. Keep it up girly! Ciao!

i like it!

Good job me