it's a good story, but short.

oh, creepy. and suicidal... u r probably getting sick of me reveiwing all your stories and saying that they are creepy but ver good and cool anyway... u r a very good writer.

Perhaps a bit short in length, but still impressive in writing material. Maybe there could've been more adjectives expressing how tragic this is, but it's still pretty good I suppose. Good job!
- Tainted Tears