r they french or english, or something else?

just read "betrothal" and i liked it, a lot! i'd love to see you continue it.

AHH! trust me to find this story when it has been discontinued :(

i love it! such an awesome plotline and the falcon... whoo child.. ;)

i hope it was as awesome for you to write as it was awesome for me to read, i really enjoyed it! hope you continue it soon but until then i guess we'll all be coming up with up own theories of what happens to rafe and mina :)

xx

Hey I really enjoy your story. But a little note, during the Regency Era there was no Soviet Union. The communist revolutions did not occur until 1917 and even then a definitive communist state did not really appear until the 1920's. Other than that I do enjoy the story!

love it

god she is such a bitch but i absolutely love her character.

i hope you'll be able to continue soon! I've loved it so far! Can't wait to know what happened next!

An amazing story!

I hope that you will revive and update this soon!

Till then...

oh yesh.. i feel for mina and rafe! fallen in love with your two lead characters.. c'mon pls write up more mina-rafe moments! can't wait for them to reconcil and catfight again! and loki by my guess would be our rafe's best fren worchester isn't it? hehe.. but i would never find out if you dun write! but no stress! take your time to write while i, an ever faithful fan will wait patiently for a new chap

if it's discontinued, why have you marked it as incomplete?

Sorry to hear that your story is to be 'discontinued'. It's a great story. :) Hope to read the rest of it soon. I'll be looking forward to the rest of it!

Wow... this is really good. Loki doesn't seem like a very Regency name though and you had a few grammar mistakes but besides that, it's a very engaging story. Oh, there's a slight historical error: in the ball scene you talk about waltzing-waltzing didn't actually come around until the Victorians. Regency dancing is more line dancing, like the Virginia Reel. But, it's a very good story, I look forward to the next update.

nilegulm

great story!

hey! love the story! please please please update soon! you can't just leave us hanging!

Have you stopped writing this then? I hope not, anyways for the most part LOVE the story but a few niggles (mostly about historic and pop referances that are out of place) to name a few The soviet union (? I suggest substituting it for china or india as these were common to the mainstream culture thinggy) Edison (? again 20th centurey referance) and then the crawling on the ceilings when william talks about Mina being possesd that is Im pretty sure something rather new resulting from a film.

I would like to say though youve done an amazing job and youve got alot furthur and done better with your story then I ever could so hats to you my dear!