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stasius 2008-01-27 ch 16,	abuseoh yesh.. i feel for mina and rafe! fallen in love with your two lead characters.. c'mon pls write up more mina-rafe moments! can't wait for them to reconcil and catfight again~! and loki by my guess would be our rafe's best fren worchester isn't it? hehe.. but i would never find out if you dun write! but no stress! take your time to write while i, an ever faithful fan will wait patiently for a new chap~
spazface 2007-12-25 ch 17, anon.	abuseif it's discontinued, why have you marked it as incomplete?
-silentregrets- 2007-12-18 ch 17,	abuseSorry to hear that your story is to be 'discontinued'. It's a great story. :) Hope to read the rest of it soon. I'll be looking forward to the rest of it!
Nilegulm 2007-10-14 ch 16,	abuseWow... this is really good. Loki doesn't seem like a very Regency name though and you had a few grammar mistakes but besides that, it's a very engaging story. Oh, there's a slight historical error: in the ball scene you talk about waltzing-waltzing didn't actually come around until the Victorians. Regency dancing is more line dancing, like the Virginia Reel. But, it's a very good story, I look forward to the next update. ~nilegulm
toazdo 2007-09-27 ch 17,	abusegreat story!!
s-pecial-lee me 2007-08-13 ch 17,	abusehey! love the story! please please please update soon! you can't just leave us hanging!
VesperK 2007-08-11 ch 17,	abuseHave you stopped writing this then? I hope not, anyways for the most part LOVE the story but a few niggles (mostly about historic and pop referances that are out of place) to name a few The soviet union (?? I suggest substituting it for china or india as these were common to the mainstream culture thinggy) Edison (?! again 20th centurey referance) and then the crawling on the ceilings when william talks about Mina being possesd that is Im pretty sure something rather new resulting from a film. I would like to say though youve done an amazing job and youve got alot furthur and done better with your story then I ever could so hats to you my dear!
fortuneismymuse 2007-05-26 ch 17,	abuseHello! I like your story a lot...um, that's all I have to say! :)
Stang65 2007-05-24 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I love this time period too.
me 2007-04-04 ch 17, anon.	abuseThe Renaissance Song, please cotinue this story! please! it's so wonderful!
euphorix 2007-03-08 ch 17,	abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON! this story is so good!! PLEASE! i beg of you! :)
dls 2007-03-03 ch 17, anon.	abuseGreat story. I love Rafe swoon. And Mina is a completely loveable heroine. Please update soon, I can't wait for Rafe and Mina to kiss and make up. And the Sophy/William subplot is both romantic and humorous.
Evenstar1389 2007-03-03 ch 17,	abusehiya, im quite fond of historical romances and this one is no exception XD I'm singaporean too btw... The part of the headstrong heroine might not be very original but it's still a refreshing change from the usual heroines. I never knew Rafe was half in love with her before he met her, it kinda explains the speed at which he fell for her after their betrothal. It's funny and unexpected that Rafe is actually a poetical drunk haha, he didnt seem like the sappy type. However a part of the story that i have a (bug?) about is the tendency to go way off tangent, like in the first 8 paragraphs of this chapter oO I had to skip over the meaningless descriptions (which im sure georgette heyer is fond of too) and so im sad that i have less to read b4 the standstill T_T
embersilence 2007-02-24 ch 17,	abuseUpdated: 09-26-06 I think we need to make it into the 2007s, no? ;D Anyways, I adore this story. I've always had a certain fondness for this type of stories. :P I adore Mina's indepent attitude and Rafe's persona.. is well, adorable. I dunno, he doesn't really act like a spy. But I guess he places that facade up to make it seem as though he's harmless? Just a guess. I'm confused on the whole Loki/Charlotte business though. Loki wants Mina...? How does he know her? @__@ With the whole Sophy-William thing.. are you going to mold their story into this one? Or are you going to write a separate one for them? Till the next installment ( I hope.. :P )!
atreyu love 2007-02-02 ch 8,	abuseinteresting :D

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