i like super love this story, it sounds so good, and interesting, ive read several novels and a bunch of regency ficcys, by far yours is currently the best, have you read 'Petals' by Danielle Night... ciao.

Hm, so Mina has competition. Meaning there are two baddies with their eyes on the couple. Well, hopefully soon there'll be some action and we'll get to say sword-wielding Mina.

Update soon!

Isa Koliki

Hah, Draco Malfoy as a lord of the gentry... interesting.

Mina seemed different in this chapter, with Sophia. More sophisticated, that kind of thing- it just seemed a bit OOC.

On to the next chapter!

Isa Koliki

Hah, yes, the Phantom of the Opera theme suited that last paragraph. I reckon Loki's going to be that dude- what's his name?- the one who broke into her room and tried to "ravish" her.

Oh, and as to one of your reviewer's replies: I haven't heard any English people say "gel" in the last, ooh, one hundred years. _

Isa Koliki

You're right, romantic Mina really is scary. But since when is "slightly psat eleven in the morning" not oversleeping? Lazy Rafe.

Isa Koliki

But of course, who else was the falcon going to be? I thought the chapter without either of the main characters was useful, it gives a bit of a break from the romantic plot. Next chapter!

Isa Koliki

Becoming friends, hey? Well, obviously Rafe's not going to settle down with just friends. I wonder what his next step will be? I didn't think he seemed too wimpish, but even if he did, remember that every character needs flaws. It'll get annoying if he's constantly perfect.

Isa Koliki

As you say, just a connecting chapter, but still well-written.

I'm trying to work out what attracts all the flamers to your story, by the way; it just doesn't make sense. It's well-written- occasionally cliche, but there are few stories on this website that aren't, and I've read far worse stories with no criticism whatsoever. Perhaps because you have a lot of reviews, some people read it delibaretly to find things wrong with it and forget their manners in the process.

Sorry, that wasn't really a review, just a rant. On to chapter 8!

Isa Koliki

Hah, I knew that was going to happen. How's Mina going to get herself out of this one, I wonder? Oh, and my money's on that Sophie and William get together. It's bound to happen.

This chapter was longer, too, so lets hope the next one's the same.

Isa Koliki

tHIS story is BLOODY BRILLANT!I just had to say that. I lovethat phrase. Neways dont listen to the flamers! they're mad!THis is a very good story!And its the one of the only humors that is truly "humor" its acually funny!AND this isnt cliche. Its very job! update!

Oh, I liked the kiss scene, I thought you wrote it very well. *pats on back*

Still waiting for that description of Rafe, though.

Isa Koliki

This chapter produced a bit more of a plot line, but Mina's starting to... irritate me. I don't know why. I love Rafe, though. First kiss? Ooh! *scurries off to next chapter*

Isa Koliki

I loved the conversation, but where was the description of Rafe? I wanted to find out what he looked like, I imagined him to be good-looking. _ Perhaps one in the next chapter. *goes ahead*

Intriguing indeed, and no, I don't think Mina's captor is going to be a run-of-the-mill villain. I liked Mary's accent, a very accurate Cockney accent.

Just one thing, I know you want to emphasise certain sentences and words, but the capitals are off-putting. Italic's would do just as well, I think.

Onto the next chapter!

A well-written prologue, I'm looking forward to reading the story already.

"Anything would be better than this. Anything.

Even getting caught by the French."

Well, that was just a brilliant line. I can sympathise with that, being English myself. XD

Isa Koliki