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BB Writewell
2004-11-10
ch 1,
I really like your story it's really close to Space Searchers, the story I'm currently writing.
Lotos-eater
2004-10-26
ch 2,
As one author of an "In the Beginning" prologue to another, I have to say... kudos. (Although my ESP is picking up Terry Pratchett vibes, I will tactfully ignore them.)
I like the story so far - the ongoing barrage of characters at the beginning was a little confusing, but I seem to be hanging on anyway. Looking forward to chapter three.
Also, do I smell some Cowboy Bebop? I'm going to ignore that too, because either way it's still a good story. Til next time -
Resplendent-in-Fire-and-Blo...
2004-10-26
ch 1,
Hey there,
Your text is confusing because the coding is cluttering it up. My guess is you tranferred a piece of .html into a .txt document and uploaded it. It's very ** the eyes. But the story itself looks interesting thus far. heh heh. . . spoons. :)
~Res
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