 gangrene. 2005-06-26 . chapter 1Very powerful. I can relate to this, when I was to read a contorverial essay to my school at an assembly, my teacher canceled it. "This will stir up the students!" He said. "It will cause anarchy!" Screw him >.< Anyhoo, awesome poem, man! |
 kt in the sky 2005-03-29 . chapter 1WOW. *sigh* that IS a really powerful poem. just wow.
please keep it up.
-kayps.-wow |
 blackoutroses 2005-03-29 . chapter 1loved the lines"You can't silence meI have a voiceI must be heard"for me they captured the meaning of the poem- the intensity of your emotions is portrayed well. |
 A.Solitaire 2005-03-18 . chapter 1 Wow, that was very powerful, I like your style. keep it up, and i hope you review more of my stuff also.*~Solo~* |
 account not in use 2005-02-27 . chapter 1*claps* Very good, Crystal. I'm printing it out to put on my wall, actaully. My school censors us alot. To much. Again, very good. |
 Arsenic336 2005-02-04 . chapter 1Wow. Powerful. Awesome work! |
 Arisa Takemura 2005-02-01 . chapter 1VERY strong message.
I especially liked this part...
"You think you won?You think I was silenced?You think that it's over?You think you have control?You think you won?"
I believe what you were trying to say was put across very nicely. As a writer, the thought of censorship is a nightmare. I appreciate your words, and also that you shared this lovely poem. Thank you! |
 The System Mother 2005-01-31 . chapter 1VERY powerful. You put a lot of emotion into it...
Thanks for the review ^_^ |
 APersonAndAHalf 2005-01-30 . chapter 1Wow. Very powerful. I love it! |
 Michael Kim 2005-01-29 . chapter 1I like the message and the structure of the poem. The repeating few words in many adjacent lines was used effectively. |
 UnShure Dreamer 2005-01-27 . chapter 1A lot of emotion is coming through in this poem! Sorry that your play got censored. The last words are very powerful though. Nice job! |
 ScourgeoftheSpanishMain 2005-01-26 . chapter 1Anger and the spirit of indignation can be a most powerful muse. I know the feeling well. Your poem got the point across and I almost heard your voice screaming in my ears. |
 Fairy-of-Fire 2004-12-01 . chapter 1wow. It's really great. I think the use of emotion is good. Is this Kris Jordan/? |
 sunscraped. 2004-10-26 . chapter 1...Its a little prolixic, but to say the least, nice job.
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