when i start reading your story , i thought there will be more drama and like many obstacle..but you make the story just enough drama for me to wait and read until the last chapter..and i kinda love it...
just you know, i thought atleast you will future the Donovan characters as the villian or some sort..but the villian itself its themselves and thier inner turmoil...
so this in not like typical saving the person you love kinda a story..so for me its make feel fuzzy feeling inside..
only one thing to complain: Why you dont write the sex scene? and you rated it M? its kinda more a like K+..and there is no swearing so the rating leave me thinking..and they are British? hurm..you kinda not mentioned it at first..and i thought there are Americans..
anyway..great story!! and i enjoyed reading it thoroughly! ^_~

One of the most romantic and touching stories I've ever read. Keep it up!

Gah, the rest of my review got cut off. Anyways, I really liked this, how you managed to make their happiness interesting and such. I kind of wanted something more about the creepy dude from the beginning and wished you'd talk a little bit more about that, but I don't think suddenly having CREEPY LURKING MAN appear in the middle of a really happy chapter which was preceded by happy chapters would be that strategic either, so I'm also somewhat glad he didn't make a reoccurence.Besides that, this story made me get warm fuzzies.

It makes me feel bad since I always write angsty stuff. Bleh.

Ahh, this was so friggin adorable

Gosh, that made me really sad. I don't know why. Both of these characters are so gushable ^_^. I'm reviewing here, but I'm going to finish the rest of the story tonight.

Epilogues:

And so it's over. I'm glad you gave them a positive outcome. After the angst they've been through they deserved their happy ending *grins* This part was probably the best written, with a lot of poignancy and effect behind it, and the last line is perfect.

From a linguistic perspective I liked the 1ps use in the second epilogue. The sprinklings of that made a nice contrast to the 3ps perspective in the first epilogue. That was cool.

It's been a hell of a ride...

Chapter 17:

Much faster paced than any prior chapter but that is to the chapter's advantage. Summarising more than detailed explanation of what they did I think worked really well but the details you selected to put in were good. The train station for example: the overpriced sandwiches and the bottled drinks and that... so traditionally part of the voyage en train *grins* Hehe, I liked the zoo stuff (esp. the shower bit) and the water park and that, and I think the bath and subsequent funness was a great way to finish.

Okay, so this has been over for a while but I still feel kinda sad. I know only the epilogues are left now...

Chapter 16:

Whe...another excellent chapter, and a realistic one at that (re: the waiting and worry about university). I think you nailed that rather well; the sensations and feelings are indeed accurate. I imagine you know yourself being in that stage now... LOL...And a nice and healthy conclusion to the chapter as with C15.

*continues on*

Chapter 15:

A *wayway* overdue review here but nonetheless, I decided to finally finish reviewing this fic, which as I recall was quite excellent.

Opening scenes: *wonders if he was subconsciously inspired* since I just named a fic 'Sunset' only a few hours after reading this. It's a sweet scene you have there anyway and I'm glad they decided not to spoil it by talking about the reality of their lives. And then how the quite serious discussion turns into cuteness and then into full slashmodeness. Always good *grins*

Interesting story. Unique and compelling. I can tell your a very prolific writer, and I remember you! You used to read my friend Kizzi-chan's story Hiku Watashi no Hohoemi. She has a new one called Lunimania, it's really good, you should check it out. Anyways, keep being productive like this and keep up the good work. I hope you come out with another one soon.

Wow! Marriage! And he wants to propose in France. How romantic! (Well, not for me, considering it's my own country, but for them, it is. Anyway, anything is romantic as soon as Adrian and Anthony are together. Mwahahaha!) I'm so happy we know they're still a couple after three years of uni and for long after that. I love happy endings. I'm going to miss the boys, but that was a wonderful story, especially with all the tension at the beginning before they finally get to realize they love each other deeply. Thank you for your hard work!

Yay for holidays! Yay for naughty scenes! Eh eh! It's sad that there's just the epilogue left. Well, this chapter already felt like a conclusion, now everything has been sorted out. I guess that's sad for us, but that's best for them. lol After all, we wouldn't want them to have too many problems just because we love their story. Well, I hope that you'll post the last *sniff* chapter as quickly as you've posted this one.

I saw "Leeds", and then I saw "Manchester", and then I was like: "Yay! That's so close!" *makes a happy dance* (Now I know why I spent a year in Manchester: to not have to wait until the following line to know that Adrian and Anthony would be in close cities. lol) Webcams... Lucky them! That was a great update. Keep up the wonderful work!

Mrowr! I liked this! ^^ Especially the first couple of paragraphs for some reason. Hm... really got me hooked. Unfortunatly, I gotta go, but I will make sure to read the rest later. ::cackles gleefully:: Great work!

Kchan

I’m very proud of you and your quick update at the moment…*takes more time to do so*. Two more chapters and an epilogue sounds good to me. Now all I have to do is wait and hope that it ends up happy. [insert not so sneaky look here.] They’re so…I’m not sure what the word I’m looking for is, but it’s definitely a good thing. Like they get each other well, but at the same time they really don’t, and I have no idea what I’m trying to say so I’m just going to smartly shut up now…[Subconsciously I think that I wanted to reassure my boyfriend that what I wanted to talk about wasn’t something absurd like me wanting to break up with him.] Much cuteness, that is. *loved it* Because it really sucks to have a character spazzing out for a chapter or two because they misunderstood what the other was trying to say. Aww, the tickling was greatness (and I hope that the distance things ends up working, even if we never really find out about it.) You know I loved this chapter, and I can’t wait for the next…