 Carrollesque 2004-12-27 . chapter 1Actually, the metephor isn't incredibly clear. It's pretty universal actually, about betrayal it speaks to me. A good poem. Keep up the good work. |
 AllyCred 2004-12-13 . chapter 1loved this i loved the way you described you toying with the kitten but in actual fact its toying with you more. i loved the imagery, great poem.lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
 Keith Andrew 2004-11-05 . chapter 1This is very original, I like it alot. I love all the images of the kitten. About how it seems like you toy with it but is it toying with you to have it's fun. This can go very deep, very well done. keep it up |
 Finalfantasyfreak1129 2004-11-05 . chapter 1 That is a really good poem Pan. Keep it up ^_^ |
 Faithless Juliet 2004-10-26 . chapter 1Intresting, it can take on many different meanings and metaphors. I like it, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet. |