 negligible fictional force 2004-12-01 . chapter 1a nightwish fan! anyway, i love this poem. it's beautiful, ethereally, and sooths yet cuts at the same time. you write with amazing style and thought. i loved it. -kismet. |
 Alba Deborah 2004-11-09 . chapter 1*blushes* im very embarrassed to admit that i am, actually, confused. i guess that it was the sense of the poem, but i didnt really understand it... however i like the allusions/mockeries to diverse fairy tales, like rapunzel's 'short' hair, and the ethereal quality of the poem... it just conveys some sort of pinkish-blue-lilac sort of cloud, i think :) rambling again? well that's what we writers are there for. luv, adri |
 Sarah Parker 2004-10-31 . chapter 1Oh wow... I LOVE the whole.. fairy-taleness of this! That's such an awesome dream! I can just see it... wow, such amazing imagery with the blue roses and the princess... it's so sweet! I love that.. wish I could see your dream, cause that sounds awesome! :D You should do something more with the dream.. like... paint a picture of it or something. it'd be so pretty :) |
 simpleplan13 2004-10-30 . chapter 1interesting... nicely written and cool descriptions but it ocnfused me a tad |
 Cirien Phoenix 2004-10-28 . chapter 1Hey, Mia,
This is freakin great! I think you did a good job! I can tell you put a lot of time and energy into this. Be proud of what you wrote, not disappointed. You did awesome!
~Lady Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. I can't write you an email right now because i'm on a school computer and it's got the email options blocked out. If I can I'll email you later. Okay? ~Sue |
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