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| emiray 2007-10-08 ch 1, | Wonderfully written. I loved it! |
| Back-Porch-Poet 7 2005-01-03 ch 1, | Hey! I just figured I'd cram it all into this one review, since it would be annoying (and too demanding upon my poor fingers...:D) to go back and review each one individually. If I were to rate them...10 for all! They were awesome! I especially love "Masks"...I remember back when you wrote that during WV. I hope to read more and more and more and more and more from ya! Ttysoon...Matt |
| Angel of the North 2005-01-03 ch 1, | Can I use this for church? I sometimes have to lead prayers at preacher's group, and I need something, and this fits the bill. I disagree with the Christianity comment by another reviewer - You're just amazing. I can relate so much to what you say - some of my poetry touches on it, but you've got this way of summing up for me what I've been wanting to say and haven't found. Thank you |
| darkholme 2004-11-04 ch 1, | I can really relate to this poem and I think alot of us can because we all fall sometimes. I realy like the lines, "Your sacrifice would save the world, but fewer still would embrace it?" and the line, "Did you see me mouth, 'I'm sorry'?" Very nice ending! |
| logical-unreason 2004-10-29 ch 1, | Softly spoke and emotive feeling in every word. Too smart to be a Christian. |
| Doodlibop 2004-10-27 ch 1, | Beautifully written!! It is so lovely. just so so lovely! |