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Reviews For: Tell Me, Did You See Me

emiray
2007-10-08
ch 1,
Wonderfully written. I loved it!
Back-Porch-Poet 7
2005-01-03
ch 1,
Hey! I just figured I'd cram it all into this one review, since it would be annoying (and too demanding upon my poor fingers...:D) to go back and review each one individually. If I were to rate them...10 for all! They were awesome! I especially love "Masks"...I remember back when you wrote that during WV. I hope to read more and more and more and more and more from ya! Ttysoon...Matt
Angel of the North
2005-01-03
ch 1,
Can I use this for church? I sometimes have to lead prayers at preacher's group, and I need something, and this fits the bill.

I disagree with the Christianity comment by another reviewer - You're just amazing. I can relate so much to what you say - some of my poetry touches on it, but you've got this way of summing up for me what I've been wanting to say and haven't found.

Thank you
darkholme
2004-11-04
ch 1,
I can really relate to this poem and I think alot of us can because we all fall sometimes. I realy like the lines, "Your sacrifice would save the world, but fewer still would embrace it?" and the line, "Did you see me mouth, 'I'm sorry'?" Very nice ending!
logical-unreason
2004-10-29
ch 1,
Softly spoke and emotive feeling in every word.
Too smart to be a Christian.
Doodlibop
2004-10-27
ch 1,
Beautifully written!!
It is so lovely. just so so lovely!
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