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| poet tree 2005-11-12 ch 1,  | abuse"she's always misunderstood. Typical." Love that line. This poem makes me laugh, it reminds me of myself back when I used to cut and such. Good job. |
| ScourgeoftheSpanishMain 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseNO BODY UNDERSTANDS ME! WAHHA HA HA HA! I loved it. I have a poem similar to that posted here. Not near as blunt, but similar. Just scroll through my stories authored page and you'll find it. :) |
| Kalopsia 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseHaha...love the sarcasm. I love how this is your first poem. That shows what you're made of...I like it. |
| Moon-Chaser 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseWell written, but the topic and the way you have said it makes it seem more easy then it is. I'm saying as I am taking the poem as sarcastic. Though it is well written all the same. |
| Hae Jin Kang 2004-11-11 ch 1, | abusecouldnt have said it better myself. misunderstood. the slits. dying. i love it. im adding yu to my favorite |
| do not resuscitate 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abusehahaha. i too hate teenage angst when it is cliched like you have portrayed here. i love the sarcasm, it bites. |
| negligible fictional force 2004-11-01 ch 1, | abusehello. who're you? chin hwee? (if you're not, don't jump on me yet) anyway. i've always hated teenage angst. gets on my nerves. all that cliched-ism about cutting and bleeding and lost love. anyway, you've taken a clear stand, and expressed it well. nice. however, you could have done more showing than telling. not bad for a first effort. -kismet. |
| Pamplemousse 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, i took the poem as being sarcastic. The poem is well written, as well. But on the content matter, sometimes it annoys me like hell, this teenage angst, but it isn't their faults all the times, it is a confusing time, though some play it up A LOT. keep it up Pamplemousse |