|Reviews for Take and Break|
| White Tea and Ginger 1/8/06 . chapter 1
I like this, I can definitely relate.
| kit feral 5/3/05 . chapter 1
"My bones bled, Till you tasted my blood, Spat it back out, Wasn't good enough" was just amazing. And the line "Inch of my ness" really stood out for some reason. The last bit just blew me away. Really amazing and powerful stuff here. Great work, keep it up!
| Aslan Israel 11/1/04 . chapter 1
Talk about intense. but in a good way. Very powerful and moving.
| Little Rebel Angel 10/28/04 . chapter 1
Awsome. Nice peom i liked the way you ended it. Sometimes it didn't make much scence but i don't alot of the time so i shouldn't talk. great poem keep writeing
| Summerkins 10/27/04 . chapter 1
Wow...very moving and somewhat frightening poem. I hope whomever this poem is about breaks away from this 'friend'.