|Reviews for Revisions|
| Arkash 4/3/05 . chapter 1
Great story is very enticing with its mixture of fairy tale and the reality of a drunk Job!
| Casey Drake 3/1/05 . chapter 9
i see. why is this called "revisions"? anyway, interesting story.
| Kusco1 12/1/04 . chapter 4
Very intersting. I like the tale of Queen Linda and the act of having to purify the blood. I'm going to be very intersted in seeing how this plays out. Keep up the good work.
| mizu no kokoro 11/26/04 . chapter 2
poor Joan, i reli feel sorry for her, and her brother
| mizu no kokoro 11/26/04 . chapter 1
AWesome start, i likes the whole idea of fairy tales contrasting with realitykeep working on this!
| Lost Inside 11/26/04 . chapter 7
Poor Charles! :( I feel bad for him! Joan too!
| Teperehmi 11/15/04 . chapter 9
That was really good! It really made me think. Keep writing. Nice work!
| Electrana 11/9/04 . chapter 9
This story is brilliant. It really got me thinking about things and what if things we thought weren't real were.