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Charity F 2005-10-08 ch 1,	abuseO_O WOW! i love this part... (quote)"Through death and birth and it all, Like too many other things, My leaves will fall." This is just so powerful...RIGHT THERE GIRL! KEEP IT COMING!!
Make me with Beautiful Line... 2005-04-02 ch 1,	abusei liked the sound of it. it flowed well and the leaves falling thing was repeated well, not too much not too little. good job.
BeautifulEcho 2005-01-16 ch 1,	abuseomg i love it!! it was awesome! all the repetition "Leaves in a cycle gently fall" was such a great touch to this work of art! i absolutely adore the similies as well, they were great! keep writing u have awesome talents! :) ~BeautifulEcho~P.S.~ thanx for the other review!
eviljackinthebox 2004-11-01 ch 1,	abuseWords cannot possibly convey how deeply that poem hit me. Now I know you don't like praise, so I'll point out the things wrong with it first just for you. The rhythm. I've noticed in most of your poems you have problem with this. Now rhythm can be stretched, but you did stretch it a bit far in this poem. Try to work on that in the future. And I like the repetitive chorus type thing that you put in about the leaves, but I'm not sensing a complete base for that. Other than that though, your imagery was beautiful, if I could convey it to you, I would, but I have no clue what to say. The truth in the poem is strong though, you support it well. I wish you well in your continuing efforts! your friend, Larissa.
Eternal Light101 2004-10-29 ch 1,	abuseDamn fine poem girl. I especially loved the ending. Very creative and extremely originol. Could you Please review my poem and my first stroy!! Thanks. Flames Out Eternal Light
simpleplan13 2004-10-29 ch 1,	abusevery nice metaphor.. I like it
swift sky silver 2004-10-27 ch 1,	abusewonderful. i loved your use of words, rhyme, and rhythm. the theme is used very effectively. keep up the great work =0)

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