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DL 2004-10-31 . chapter 1
And the rest of it is where?!? WOMAN! DON'T MAKE ME READ SOMETHING IF YOU'RE GONNA LEAVE ME AT A CLIFF HANGER!
Larina 2004-10-27 . chapter 1
I like Jarrod. He seems like a jerk. >:)
Your characters are very interesting. They seem quite textured. You have a great ability to create the sense of an unspoken past, both in their interactions and Selena's reactions to their actions. Example: Her thoughts when Jarrod messes up his hair.
I don't want to discourage you, but I feel as though it could stand some polish. It felt a bit choppy.
I assume there's more to come? I certianly hope so. This has captured my attention.
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