Are you gonna continue? It's a good beginning. The guy poking fun at the girl(while actually loving her) story lines r one of my favs hahaha. Jus watch out for a few minor grammar errors. I guess the rest is ok.

I so love this story! please update soon!

I like this a lot. At first I thought it was going to be like all the other stories with the enemies falling in love... but this is a relief of the cliches...