very nicely done. i love your description, especially when you say "your breath touches me, lace-like."

~MAY YOU ALWAYS FLY FREE~

HorseChild

Hnn. It's nice. Very nice.

-Bob and I. We say hi.

beautiful imagery.

just a minor note- 'biege' is s'posed to be 'beige'.

cheers,lin.

There's some seriously amazing imagery in this. Sorry I haven't reviewed much recently! good work!

Great poem! This is really good! I don't write poems but i do write songs so it's somewht the same. And by the way, i think it's really cool that you don't care what other people think about you. I am not lesbian but i am different than most people and i don't like when label me.

Insulting Dave is not cool.

wow.. I like this.. nicely done

wow this poem is so incredibly interesting... *is awed*