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| anonymously_infamous 2004-10-29 ch 1, | I like this, it tells a story. One thing I have to ask though, do you always write about things that have happened to you, things that are true? I know I can't... The only thing is that some of the lines are a bit long, though you might have intended it that way. |
| redsbury 2004-10-28 ch 1, | Good! I liked your use of imagery--it really left an impression of what you were feeling. Keep writing! |