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Reviews For: Waking into Nothing

anonymously_infamous
2004-10-29
ch 1,
I like this, it tells a story. One thing I have to ask though, do you always write about things that have happened to you, things that are true? I know I can't... The only thing is that some of the lines are a bit long, though you might have intended it that way.
redsbury
2004-10-28
ch 1,
Good! I liked your use of imagery--it really left an impression of what you were feeling. Keep writing!
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