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| DragonAtHeart 2005-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing. Absoluetely amazing. u rock .. ur sucha good writer. ~Dragon |
| Silver Shadows 2004-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuse*tear* I know the feeling. I know the feeling...I really like the depth you put across here. Very subtle, yet in your face. If that really made sense! ^_^ |
| Braddie 2004-12-27 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome. What I like most about your poems is that I can relate to basically all of them. I read them thinking this is exactly what I feel. Just gotta remember to have hope that things can and will work out :) |
| g-e-kutie 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseLovely...absolutely beautiful. Simply stated, yet you carry so much longing and sadness throughout it. I love these lines..."And I wish that it was just black and white / Because all these shades of grey are killing me." and "And I’ll drown in my memories, / Get lost in the forest, as I try to forget"Those lines kick **! -CS P.S. thanks for reviewing my writing! it's very much appreciated! |
| Rob-chan 2004-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuse*_* Pretty. I think my mind and heart are slowly getting used to cuteness and pretty things, 'cause I don't feel the need to curl up into a ball when I hear something touching/pretty. ^_^o As for my favourite bit, I liked the start the best. Mostly because of all the mentioning of colour, and the prospect of spreading wings. ('Course, *my* wings would be evil, badass raven wings, but... n.n;)I love it. =^_^= |