 Shadow On The Sun 2005-01-07 . chapter 1o i like this one, very cool tres magnificant oui.. heheh keep writting stuff like that too ! very cool |
 Deaths Deciples 2005-01-03 . chapter 1*stares* holy...shat... WOW... but one lil, ints, tiny, winy, weeny, little thing... you spelt they wrong at the end |
 Chris Taylor 2004-10-28 . chapter 1hey zephyr, not bad, but u misspelled one of the last words (it is supposed to be "they", right? other than that, not bad. |
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