I like the use of the word monochrome. It really helped me to imagine.

I loved this once, but it was more like a small description of a place than a short story. Maybe thats what you were going for? I don't know, but I liked it.

You should be proud, I've just read and reviewed every chapter of your story. I don't think I've ever done that before. Very nice. Well, unless I come accross another peice of your writing, this is farewell. Good luck with your writing, I hope this continues.

Look me up if you have the time, Golden Moment, Inc is my favorite story (that I have written) at the moment, I also like World Without End. Anyway, look em up if you feel like it. Peace.

This one caught my attention because its the first one with speach in it. It was good, but at the same time very anti-climatic. But we all have different visions of Heaven, so I can't critize a peice just because its not what I would have done. Still, not your best, but good.

I love this one because it has an errie feeling to it, the end was just kinda... wicked. Its got a very real life feeling to it, with a fictional shaprness. Sorry if you don't understand that, I'm not great with words (said the self proclaimed writer).

This one is kinda cool, but I didn't like the repeated words. But other than that, nice. If you don't mind my asking, when do you write these? At night? Because that seems to be the time I come up with this kinda thing.

To be honest, I didn't like this one (Stained) as much as the others. Not to say its not any good, I just personally prefered the others. Can't quite place what I didn't like about this once, but there is something... something small. Sorry, can't think how to word it.

Writers are always tied in with sorrow. Nice one, loved it.

Wilting Flower is a depressing little story isn't it? Still, nicely done, the shortness is almost like sharpness in this once, I liked it.

This is my favorite kind of story on a day like today; short and sweet. I tend to write short stories these days too. I loved the simple touch your writing style put on the story. Very nice.