oh nice! i actually thought this fic ended on chapter 2

This is a fun story, with great characters. I would have liked to have seen more backstory on Bonnie, why was she more educated than the others. What type of supply system had the town worked out, what brings the homesteaders in? This could easily become a series of shorts expanding on the town, having showdowns with the new sheriff. She has the transit capable ship and could bring small hitech tradegoods, chase smugglers, establish better conditions for the towneys. All sorts of potentials here. Thanks for sharing!

This was a good story. I enjoy the work you put into your stories and I plan to more of them. Keep up the great work.

I like it wheather you add on to the this or not, but I defanitly whould not be agentst it.

You ended the story well, which is a plus for you (Not that you've ever ended a story badly!) Again, apologizes for the lateness of the reviews, but both and Fiction Press are not sending out Author alerts like they used to.

Hahahahaha!"But you're a terrible shot too."lol.

Please write more!

just a few spelling errors: I only skimmed it over so yeah,I havent read the whole thing, I'm busy. But it caught my eye so I read some of it. Sounds Trigun-y without the whole "out in space without contact to earth" thing so far. Did you catch that? ha ha neither did I.

A very interesting start. I would like to find out how a woman managed to pass herself off as a man with all this technology in this time, and still be able to do this sort of job.

This was a piece of excellent work. I had a few questions about the horses, and western scenery but you cleared those up with the innovative encyclopedia galactica. Excellent work on this. There is really nothing to say negatively about this story, except that it deserves a quick update!
Calvin Fitzgerald