Wow. I really love this one, it's amazing. Your work is wonderful and amazing. Well, hope you write more soon, Alyssa! :)

I really liked that : ) I've never read the book it's based on, but it was well-written with lots of nice imagery. It reminds me a lot of Yang...teehee :P

oh my, how lovely! Your symbolism and unique way of expressing your meaning (and perhaps motives??) is, as always, uh... (gosh be-darn it, I lost my train of thought...)
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Nevermind. I loved your poem.