sweet. nice and creepalicious.

Rargh! You damn beetch! You got rid of my quote. *twitch*

Whoa, at first I thought the guy was just completely insane and that he was delusional, but that demonic twist at the end was really cool! This is a great short horror story, I like it. It was good for a read after supper during that wonderful time before homework when I'm free.

*shivers* I love the way you stayed in the insane man's point of view through out most of the story. jumping around from memory to reality only seemed to enhance the instability. This is great!

EA

P.s. thanks for reviewing my story. :)

A littel creepy. But great story, I'm looking forward to more

Phwee, cool

o luv ur depth in this , creepy detials, nice work!

First off, let me say I adore the structure you've adopted for this chapter. I'm a fan of disjointed, confused paragraphs (used well and in the right place, of course), and you put them to good work here. Nice job. Ominous, though... *chews nails*
Thank you for your reviews of Null, and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to 'reply'.
Oh, I love being confused upon beginning stories - so long as I'm intrigued as well! (and I am, don't worry ^_^)
- sofi x

creepy. right time for halloween though. Kewl to see more l8r!

Creepy...I'll expect more!
-Alareic-

*shivers* Oh, that's creepy...*shivers again* Ouch. Very interesting, though. Perfect timing for Halloween! ^_^ *sighs* I'm the first one to review again, aren't I? -_- I have too much time on my hands...very bloody. Really, I loved it. Disgusting, but I loved it. Ask Callie, I have a very gothic mind. Well...I should get a life, I guess. ^_^ Young little misfit that I am.
Good night, good night! parting is such sweet sorrow.
Phoenix