as soon as i'dseen you'd reviewed me, i went and read as many as your poems as possible. i love how you don't rely on rhymes. that's waht bothers me about so many people on fictionpress:they try to rhyme and end up turning out mediocre work. about the migration thing, the ending wasn't there because right now it's not biannual yet. that poem is old. i change it every time i have one of those ig old migrations. i add something on it. my next one is supposed to be this summer. i don't know if you can wait that long...

Oh, I really liked this one! I especially liked the lines "Are you aware of that, Are you aware of me, Am I but a memory" It brought some perspective into your interpretations of their actions. And the end... "But almost isn't enough, You're not enough, You were never enough, That disapoints me" It's very powerful, the shame of hoping in someone who couldn't pull through. The longing to go back and change all the things you did to get them where you wanted them, and none of it worked. The sinking feeling when you realize that your goals have been out of your reach, and theirs, and you were just to set on them to look around at reality. It hurts. You did a very good job in writing this.

WOW. Awesome poem, with a bitter and contemplative taste.

wow...that last line is perfect.

um... woah. I don't even know what to say. that's... awesome.

I really like this poem.. it reminds me a lot of my ex... I think a lot of people have experienced this... nicely written