Reviews for The Rain will Never Cease

SwordOfLightBladeOfDarkness 2006-11-20 ch 1,	are you going to update this?
Darlingdeath 2005-03-13 ch 11,	I like it... Keep writing
xxbroken 2004-11-10 ch 4,	Tense changes are bad. Pick present or past and stay in it. Tone down the angst, because it's a bit cliche to make your character so horribly abused. Spaces after periods, capitals after periods. What this is, is what we call a Angst!Sue. She's so tortured at home, yet inside she's actually quite beautiful (as well as outside). Right. Don't use periods in place of commas, it's just wrong. Overall, you're going to have to develop your characters are bit further. Taking a sue and slapping on a tortured label does not make a good character.