Another amazing poem, though a bit short. But I guess the shortness of it adds to why it's one of my favorites too.

wow, short but still rather powerful. Nice work.

Hey, cool. It reminds me of those old spaghetti westerns. I can imagine people cowering behind their dust-covered windows as prarie grass rolls through, and the jangle of spurs as boots clunk steadily down the dusty road.
Oops, tangent much? Well, good job!

compared to the rest of ur work this is the best..it ryhmes and i love its simplsity..one thing thou, why does the world end at noon ;)
u seem like a promosing writter so ill add you to my favorites..hope u get to r&r my stuff mayb they could come in handy to u :)