I'm crying! Are you happy now? You've gone and made me cry... *sniffle* By the way, I love writing that makes me cry. If I'm crying, you've done a wonderful job!I'd make a penguin crying if I could find the right punctuation marks... :>

Oh my Jebus (inside joke)... That was really sad... at first I was reading it an thinking, "Holy Sheise! She's so talking about me and my ex!" But then the person commited suicide and I was like, "Nope... I never shot myself..." but still wow! ~Natalie

that really was sad, you have to pity the guy though. oh and the rhyme was well done.

How sad!But wondorful use of emotion!

That was really well written! Very sad as well:( You have a talent for poetry!

dude...i liked this poem a lot a lot...good job

That about made me cry. It's so... full of emotion. I really liked it.
~Queen of Broken Hearts
P.S. Please look at my poems if you have time! Thanks.