I really like this story! You have good characterizations and your style is very pleasant to read. I'd love it if you continued this.

The only problem I had with the story was that it was rather fast-paced. You could probably have developed Jake and Luca's relationship more before signing them off as a couple. Plus, they only knew each other for a few hours before becoming "obsessed" with each other. Don't you think that's a bit sudden?

Please please please continue, though!! It's a really great story!

You HAVE to continue! That was awesome! Please update!