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| swirlygirl 2005-03-01 ch 1,   | great poem...i especially love the title...i would leave the second line just as it is. |
| Poetrybay 2005-01-30 ch 1, | I love this poem because it have a nice ring to it and an eye catching title. |
| myno 2005-01-06 ch 1, | hm... very interesting... I think i'll ponder the meaning for a bit. I like it better with the middle line left as is, by the way. |
| Toph Gonzalez 2005-01-06 ch 1, | I haven't watched 'The Sound of Music' (although we have a dvd here at home) so I don't have a clue what the last line was all about... but nonetheless, the first two lines sound rich and fresh and very original. I can't choose between both second lines, both are endearing in their own unique way. |
| Melindotty 2004-11-28 ch 1, | o a hot boy is there? mwahahaha |
| DameNoire 2004-11-14 ch 1, | That was really beautiful. I'm so ashamed, I actually had to read it a couple of times before I understood it. It sounds nice, very dreamy. I liked the "A Rolfe for Liesl" line a lot. -x- DameNoire |
| Caledonia 2004-11-02 ch 1, | a Rolfe for Liesl! YAY! the second line...did you put that one because i picked it? |
| McLaren's Girl 2004-10-31 ch 1, | one word- beautiful. I like the way you call them... A Rolfe for Liesl. |
| Treblew 2004-10-31 ch 1, | That was way beyond me...I am going to have to read it a few times to let my brain comprehend...now that makes me feel like a major idiot. OK, after that few times of reading, I think it's really great.[If I had a fancier word, I'd have used it.] -RW5-FIVE! |
| lioness2004 2004-10-31 ch 1, | I love it! I love it! I love it! You keep writing and I'll keep reading! |
| Elraralia 2004-10-31 ch 1, | Wow... this one is really good, I like this one the best of all your haikus I've read! =0) Especially the 2nd line which is just beautiful... |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-10-31 ch 1, | Ah, the Sound-of-Music—a D-light for heart to soar on. A favorite I don't reveal easily. Go see the movie "Ray", like in Ray Charles's (Robinson) life story. Another voice that haunts and thrills. Happy, so happy to have read this haiku. m |