oh, I liked this :)no tears, not sentimental and personal enough, but touching and reminding

sugei. very nice! *tries to hide her tears*

That was wonderful. Well, wonderfully sad. I don't know. great work ^ ^

hey, awesome poem!! It's really very sentimental and touching, I really enjoyed it! And you're writing style is sophisticated, so it came out excellently!

There's nothing worse than having to watch someone you love walk away from you, and I'm sorry if you had to go through that. You really caught the emotion, and anyone who has also gone through this will probably shed a tear at the memory.

full of emotion! ^^ Keep up the great work. (I like your penname)

very touching ...i like the flow and the idea