I'd like to know what inspires you for all this! Death, love, hate...and you make each poem sound like what you're talking about has happened to you...maybe it has...simply superlative! (which sounds really nerdy...):>

I'm not sure how to comprehend this... but I LIKE IT! It is neat how everything is contradicting itself, while at the same time it makes sense. Next time, I would use punctuation (it is a great help to the reader) and also more interesting words (they really make a dramatic difference). Overall, good job!