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melody mama 2004-12-23 . chapter 1
I love your diction. You use the perfect words to get your point across and make it sound really pretty. Just one thing, all of your poems are so short. Try to lengthen them a little.
Gaki Toki 2004-10-31 . chapter 1
About F&F, how far did you read? If you read farther then obviously those questions shall be answered, that's the whole suspense of it, it's those questions that lead the reader into wanting to read more. Shall I say...Duh?
Ike and Theo FOREVER!
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