I liked it, you definetely express emotion very well. I especially liked this:Tears form inside my heart,And burst out from my eyes.

Keep up the great work!

Very good poem, with lots of emotion.
And I don't really know what to say on the actual issue, 'cause I don't know you well enough. Ah well.

I love this! I really do. I love the rhyme, the rythum and the the structure. I understand, too exactly where you are coming from! I myself experienced that brief period of euphoria, before writer's block came and sucked it all away. I can't write now, it seems, but I think you should keep going, because in no way have you lost your touch! This was amazing, it's going on my favorites and I'm printing it out!

good poem...i went through a dry spell with my poetry and i thought i would lose my ability to write...but i wrote one last night...so hopefully there will be more to follow soon after...i hope things work out for u as well...good poem once again