 tickle-me-pretty15 2004-12-29 . chapter 1We are so much alike its not funny. I had a poem almost like that in my head for years. Its really good, oh i saw you pictures, the just to cute, hehe i have to say it, they rock my socks offXD! Well im off see! ~tickles~ |
 LynnMarie 2004-11-20 . chapter 1Great poem! You can tell what you're saying by it, good job. The only thing I don't like is the last line (and I of course I am not weak). It seems a little to bold and out of place, just a suggestion!
(you reviwed my story, and I added a chapter, just to let you know, but it hasn't shown up yet! please read it!) |