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Reviews For: The Puppet and The Girl

ayadora
2005-12-17
ch 1,
abuseI really like it. But it seems like a runon sentence. Like mine, I can't get the STUPID SPACING to work right.
Delphian-Angel
2005-11-19
ch 1,
abuseThis was a wonderful piece, very moving:)
Hermefonia
2005-02-19
ch 1,
abuseWow! amazing.It's like it almost happened to me. I felt like it was me, witnessing all that in the flesh. Good Work, now I'm depressed by all that.
Joewhatever
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abuseThis was very interesting...well done. The lines about the girl and the puppet and then at the end. Fabulous!
Sage Valkisco
2004-12-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was confusing but for some reason is appealed to me...like the story should be a music video...the whole video in a dark blue tint...MAGNIFICO
Gaki Toki
2004-10-31
ch 1,
abuse...Okay, either my throat is seizing and I need to go to the hospital, or that really touched me...I sure as Hell hope it's the latter.
Always Choking Up,
Gaki Toki
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