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| ayadora 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI really like it. But it seems like a runon sentence. Like mine, I can't get the STUPID SPACING to work right. |
| Delphian-Angel 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was a wonderful piece, very moving:) |
| Hermefonia 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWow! amazing.It's like it almost happened to me. I felt like it was me, witnessing all that in the flesh. Good Work, now I'm depressed by all that. |
| Joewhatever 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was very interesting...well done. The lines about the girl and the puppet and then at the end. Fabulous! |
| Sage Valkisco 2004-12-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was confusing but for some reason is appealed to me...like the story should be a music video...the whole video in a dark blue tint...MAGNIFICO |
| Gaki Toki 2004-10-31 ch 1, | abuse...Okay, either my throat is seizing and I need to go to the hospital, or that really touched me...I sure as Hell hope it's the latter. Always Choking Up, Gaki Toki |