I thought it was a good poem, maybe because its kinda what Im feeling right now. About the swearing, it all depends on whether or not people are mature enough to use it, or understand it. I for one am 13, and having been through alot for my age, I understand (in my own way) why you used those words.

Well, it might have been a great poem without the curse words. I realize you rated it PG-13, but it's my belief that noone, and definaltly not 13 years olds, should hear that kind of language. In my opinion, poems with profanity should be R rated, but, as always, I suppose that's a judgement call.