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biminator 2004-12-15 . chapter 1
hhm. this was a fascination concept, and I enjoyed it. The formatting is bad, though, with the lines breaking at weird places. You use the phrase "pecking order" oonce too many, and that's a little annoying. Overall, though, this is fascinating. nice job.
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