Wow. This was just...woah. ;( Great job, love the ending.

*sigh* Good but depressingly relatable...is that a word?...

Very great job, considering i can totally relate right now. ^_^ Keep writing!

"I'm to stuck in the past to look forward. I'm too afraid of defeat to try for victory."
I love those lines! Great short and simple little poem.

wow, I like this! It had a very nice flow. Keep up the good work

Really a good poem. I like it a lot.