not pure enough for goldenyet she's too lucky for less

Love those lines. Wonderful. Gave me a perfect image. Brava!

very sweet and well written

pretty poem :D i liked the words u used in this Silver touch great use LOL!_

very nice poem, It's cheerful and I like that because there is so much angst on this site. (I know, I contribute to the angst collection. *sigh*) REally though, it's a very good poem.