|Reviews for Bizarre thoughts of a boy I know|
| Michael Aliester Smith 12/17/06 . chapter 1
You have such amazing flow. The rhythm and rhyme seem effortless and natural. It's beautiful. As far as technique, this poem is one of the most interesting I've ever read on Fictionpress. And it's well worded and eloquently expressed. Good on you, mate.
| reluctant writer 3/28/05 . chapter 1
Very good descriptions. The boy you know must be very cerebral.
| deletemyaccount2012 1/28/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful, especialy the line, "As on his tongue the Gods scribe their law."
| TaschaBear 12/30/04 . chapter 1
OH GOD! NEW FAVE POEM! I LOVE IT! My fave stanza was " As on his tounge the Gods scribe their law" THAT IS SO COOLIO!
Thanks for reviewing me!
Keep on writing
| Kalopsia 12/22/04 . chapter 1
oh, this is a sweet poem. though, i would check your spelling.
| simpleplan13 11/23/04 . chapter 1
very sweet... I like it a lot.. nice descriptions.. tahnks for your review
| TheDevilLikesToDream 11/18/04 . chapter 1
just lovely! i especially like the line "the words write themselves on the curve of his lips". love your writing.
| poetic abortion 11/15/04 . chapter 1
O This was really good ! Your very very very very very very very talented ! -
| Cry Tears of Darkness 11/6/04 . chapter 1
ah i like this. a very good poem ppl can so relate to, like me! i like it and thanks for reviewing mine ;)
| nesy 11/6/04 . chapter 1
Don't you like bizarre thoughts from boys? I absolutely love that. It sums up nicely something I once felt... felt? Well, good poem,going on my fav. Thank you so much for reviewing my stuff.
| eighteen hundred 11/5/04 . chapter 1
I like this piece a lot. You did a great job with the rhyming, it was very natural; didn't seem forced. A few grammatical errors but nothing that really took away from it really. And thanks loads for reviewing some of my stuff XD
| JoyfullyStruggling 11/2/04 . chapter 1
quick and sweet, this is nice