Publish this. Seriously. Yeah, there may be some editing required (especially in book one) but as the series went on, the plot just seems to weave tighter and tighter, and at the moment I cannot feel my feet because I have been unable to leave the computer, so enthralling was this last book. This story and you as a writer shines blinding bright with extreme potential. You are fantastic. If I see these in a bookstore someday, I will totally tell everyone in the near vicinity that I read it first on fictionpress. I will then proceed to rub that fact in their faces. Also, Chancy rocks.

Ugh, I can't believe that she can't understand why Saxon thinks she hates him. She only ripped out his heart.

LOL. Totally didn't see the succubus thing coming. Nice twist and explains a bit. She's going to need to do something about that or she'll end up being kissed by everyone at this rate.

first before i forget: why didnt you have Saxon or Nicci say they love each other during their little "lets get back together" conversation? i was waiting and waiting and waiting but it never came...i know that neither one of them were big on saying i love you to begin with but i think that when they are getting back together would be an appropriate time to throw one of those in. just a thought. now WHAT A TWIST! omfg this is so good...im almost sad that i found these books because i have been reading them nonstop for days and now i dont have anything to read...im thinking about jumping over to Chancy's story soon though. OH also!! whats up with Raziel?? he had feelings for Nicci too and even though he wanted her to find Saxon more than any of her other suitors, i still feel as though he is unresolved. i know that you are making another book, but i feel like you should throw soe Raziel love into the epilogue. just a thought. and im just going to warn you that ill be randomly thinking about your books during the day and think of something that i wanted to comment about but forgot, so if you get random revies at the end of this book, i apologize in advance. again, let me say you did a fantastic job and if you dont seriously consider trying to get this published...well i dont know what i will do besides be dissapointed but YOU SHOULD...SERIOUSLY...


oh wait, just thought of something...what has changed so much with Logan?? besides he is like "all powerful werecreature guy" now. Nicci noticed more changes and i didnt know if there was something else i was missing...


ok now im really stopping here...thank you so much for writing this!

alright some quick comments...so this chapter is the first time that i have actually liked Aisling since he was first introduced. i didnt really care for him most of the time because i didnt trust him and i didnt like what he did to Nicci. OMFG i just realized she still has that ring of his and it will always be able to find him! but i dont think she would call him back unless it was important. having said that, i think that he should have left saying that he would write once in a while etc. i mean i know it would be hard to see Nicci everyday or to even talk to her everyday but once in a while would be a nice "friend" thing to do. o man i love Aisling now even though i love Saxon more...DAMN you hurt my head!!

okay, one problem and one suggestion. the problem is that you randomly have Nicci talk like this is in the past when the whole time it has been in the present (i'm not good with tenses but at one point you say something about the unicorn and then Nicci says "he later told me that"...) i dont think that the information you say there is all that important (so far) so i would suggest just taking it out. now the suggestion is that i think you should capitilize "Were" when you are talking about the creatures because sometimes i get mixed up with "Were" and were like "we were, they were" etc. only a suggestion and i know it would be a pain to go back and fix it all but if you ever have time or if you are re-editing for some reason OR i you want to just do it in the future...anyway im going to go finish reading YAY!

ok a few comments before i forget them. in one of the earlier chapters, you had Nicci take out a thousand dollars at the atm but im pretty positive that the maximum allowed is 500 per day. i know its really stupid but if you had time and cared enough you could just go back and say she already had some money on her or went to a bank or something. the other thing is DONT GET MY SAXON HOPES UP AGAIN! *tries to look threatening* i was so happy when i thought he was back but then you crushed my hopes and dreams... oh and i have a feeling that that wasnt an ordinary dream...it seemed too detailed and life-like. maybe thats just me...ok im moving on, sorry or the random reveiw and because its a novel in and of itself.

oh jeez, you nearly gave me a heart attack with the ending of your last book...DONT DO THAT! so i have only read chapter one but already, im not mad at you anymore. actually im extremely impressed. you made us sit on the edge of our seats just long enough to read the beginning of the third book. i just feel so bad for all the people that were reading you story as you were writing it and posting it because they had to probably wait a long time to find out if Saxon was dead or not. i guess i'm just lucky. okay well im sincerely sorry for this rant. i'll get back to reading now.

Your story was friggin awesome. Took me so long to finsih them though. But it was a great idea and I love how you followed through on it.

Aw. I just finished the entire trilogy. It was beautiful. I really hope that one day you do write a fourth book. ^_^

I absoultly loved the whole thing! I really hope you write a fouth book. It's really hard for me to find something on fictionpress that I can really get into, you did an amazing job. How did you come up with the concept for this? I've been wondering since I started reading but couldn't stop to find out because I was so into it.Keep writing! You're one of the best writers I've found on here. I'll be waiting for the fourth book! :D

WRITE THE FOURTH! I'll cry if you don't! And the part with Aisling...that makes me so sad. I almost cried. Heh. I got too attatched to the characters in the story. Now I'm sad. It was really good though...it's...I don't even know a word that could possibly describe how good it is. I'm still sad, though. Make the fourth book...please? I don't want to cry.

Sincerely, H.P. Farmer

I really enjoy this trilogy, and I like the depth of the problems that you've gotten Nicci into. However, I've really got to ask if you've ever read the Anita Blake, vampire hunter (I think) series by Laurell K. Hamilton. Nicci's relationship problems are really reminiscent of her's.

I am in total AW of your story. I sat dow n and read the untire 3 books in 4 days...it was amazing...Can't wait till the 4th-DannyDangerous-

That's not fair. I hate unhappy endings. And as for Aisling and Nicci, that was an unhappy ending. But I can't let myself cry, so this is hard. I'm so angry you had to make it this way. I hope you do write that fourth part.